In trying to find just one thing to discuss in Waiting For the Barbarians I found it quite difficult. Coetzee once again offers a world full of imagery, language and description; a world where the concept of ‘civilized’ and uncivilized seem to be often interchangeable. Though the text itself is, without a doubt, full of rich quotes that illustrate the Magistrate’s fall from grace, what I’d like to do is offer one passage that I feel elucidates the theme of the text. Through the use of imagery and language, I feel that the following passage provides an illustration of the general context of Coetzee’s Waiting For the Barbarians. I will provide the passage and then address why I feel it addresses the themes of the text:
“At night when everything is still the cockroaches come out to explore. I hear, or perhaps imagine, the horny clicking of their wings, the scurry of their feet across the paved floor. They are lured by the smell of the bucket in the corner, the morsels of food on the floor; no doubt too by this mountain of flesh giving off its mulifarious odours of life and decay. … Thereafter I often jerk awake during the night, twitching, brushing myself off, feeling the phantom probings of their antennae at my lips, my eyes. From such beginnings grow obsessions. I am warned” (Coetzee 79).
I picked this passage for a reason, the language itself provides insight to the novel as a whole. Though Coetzee is quite literally discussing a cockroach and it’s journey across the floor where he is held, the undertones of the passage provide much more. It seems that he discusses the cockroach as the people of authority in the Empire judge the barbarians; they too appear as pesky, bugs that come out in darkness. To me at least it seems that there is little of the concept of light in the novel. Everything appears dark, dreary, perhaps even a bit apocalyptic with little if any hints that the “Empire” is doing anything correctly; rather it seems that they are all following BLIND orders from a higher authority or Colonel Joll.
Next the undertones in the language of the text seem to suggest that he himself is analogous to what the cockroach represents. He describes the cockroach and the “horny clicking of their wings”. I find the word choice to be interesting; and feel that this reflects his own sexual relationships throughout the book (horny reflecting his own drive and wings reflecting his own parts and need to be fulfilled).
Further, the cockroaches, like himself, are drawn to the flesh, gluttony, food and decay (though their standards are different than his own the principle is the same). At the start of the novel he seems to bask in all that the role of Magistrate has given him: women, sex, a home, food; all of it seem to feed his own purposes; just as he now, in his fallen state, seem to feed the purposes of his cockroaches.
Lastly, the final sentences, at least on the level of language, seems to me to contrast his readiness to anticipate the cockroaches with his inabilities to anticipate the realities of his life under the Empire. It also seems to rival his inabilities to accept realities; he likes that he can function in a position of power until he makes the decision to free the barbarian girl, his mistress. It seems that he fails to see the consequences of his actions.
Lastly in, “From such beginnings grow obsessions. I am warned”, it seems he is only warned in reference to how he should anticipate the cockroaches. It seems as if in any other regard he is obsessed, whether with punishing barbarians or his sexual satisfaction, and yet he continues (in contrast to his interaction with the cockroaches) to be unwarned. Thus, we find him at the start of the book following orders under the Empire, in the middle of the book imprisoned because he let his mistress be free, and at the end of the book still unable to see the road in front of him “I think: I see something in front of my face and I still don’t see it” (155). It seems, he is the cockroach, like the bug shooting across the floor he wants to be something else, something running away and “outside history” (154). Yet in his world he does not know how to be. In his world it is impossible. Perhaps this is life under the “Empire” whatever world that is that the Empire represent. Unfortunate as it is our Magistrate, fallen and over sexualized protagonist of the novel, is not allowed to be anything other than a cockroach.